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About Me Member Emotional Poet AliFemale/Australia Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Months
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They say I'm CRAZY
They say I'm DIFFERENT
They say I'm WRONG
They say I'm DONE FOR.

I don't care, I have myself and a few close friends and that's good enough for me. Writing is one of my releases of things in a way I guess.
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AUSSIE girl.
MUSIC is life.
BRACES aren't NERDY
PURPLE fringes FTW
LOVE and FEELINGS to WRITE about
people say i'm CRAZY
but i don't CARE
live LIFE
and GET ON with it.
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Life is like a game, all we can do is wish there were a cheat way out.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Sydney, Australia
  • Interests: Music, Art, Textiles, Softball,
  • Favourite band or musician: Something With Numbers, Billy Talent, Led Zeppelin
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock or metal
  • Favourite artist: :/
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.R.Tolkein
  • Operating System: MAC!!!
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod Nano Chromatic
  • Personal Quote: Life is a game, and all we can do is wish we had a cheat way out
  • Tools of the Trade: Pen & Paper

Ali and Clare

Thu Nov 12, 2009, 12:47 AM
Ok, so recently, I have tried a new way of writing - with a friend. I have named this mini-series "Reflections on Reality"otherwise known as ROR. Basically, it's about two girls, Clare and Ali who "send" each poems about how they like who they like, and how they think each other feels about it and stuff. So this is a basic character analysis:


Clare.
Clare is a girl who is a bit older than Ali, and who believes love is like a thistle, something which looks beautiful is a way (their purple flowers!), but when you run over to it, it is prickly all over. She loves a man much older than her, by at least 10 years.. more than that! She gets quite angsty about her love, and sometimes wishes she were of a different generation or time, so she could marry this man. Unfortunately, she's not, so she is a rather sad character at the same time.

Ali.
Ali however, is a girl who loves life, and thinks love is a privelage in a way. She is very passionate about her love, and thinks of it as rose.. something which is beautiful is many ways other than looks, but you have to be careful with. She loves a guy about her own age, but he fails to see that she loves him, although everyone around them can tell she does. Even when she tells him he isn't sure if he believes her. She tends to use metaphors when she thinks about her love, and their relationship, almost like an artist and a painting.


As you can see, Ali is a more developed character in a way, whereas Clare is not so sure about her view on life. It changes as the days pass.

Ali

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:icongaby-mix:
thanks for the fav

--
Te amo, te deseo, justo ahora...
:iconandriox:
responded to your mission.
Love your poetry.
:iconsplitspirit:
hahas, thanks. i was bored so I thought "why not advertise?"
thanks, i try very hard when writing to get just what i mean down. doesnt always work though ;P

--
Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there. - giffordm [link]
:iconandriox:
Awesome.

We both live in/near Sydney, coincidentally. Where abouts are you?
:iconsplitspirit:
Strathfield area.
You?
Thanks heaps for the watch! :D

--
Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there. - giffordm [link]
:iconteach:
thank you for the favorite
:iconsplitspirit:
no problem :D

--
Like a pheonix we can rise from these ashes and be born again into a new life. The past will die and fall away, but the future is always there. - giffordm [link]
:iconmundolibre:
hello there ^_^
how are you?
thnx for the fav ^_^

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